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	<description>sci-fi and fantasy for the savior of our fallen race</description>
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		<title>Comment on Our Homes: A Preview of the Pervasive Knowledge of God&#8217;s Glory by Peter Rust</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Peter Rust]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Oct 2011 17:12:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Cool, David!

I&#039;ll have a beta version of my novel&#039;s outline done in 2-4 weeks and will be pitching it to various people for feedback. If he&#039;s interested, have him email me (you can find my email address on facebook) and I&#039;ll pitch it to him and see what his level of interest is.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cool, David!</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll have a beta version of my novel&#8217;s outline done in 2-4 weeks and will be pitching it to various people for feedback. If he&#8217;s interested, have him email me (you can find my email address on facebook) and I&#8217;ll pitch it to him and see what his level of interest is.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Our Homes: A Preview of the Pervasive Knowledge of God&#8217;s Glory by David Robison</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[David Robison]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Oct 2011 16:15:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Oh, to clarify, Jon lives in southern California, near me. Daniel is my brother that lives in Lynden.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Oh, to clarify, Jon lives in southern California, near me. Daniel is my brother that lives in Lynden.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Our Homes: A Preview of the Pervasive Knowledge of God&#8217;s Glory by David Robison</title>
		<link>http://blog.unashamedstudios.com/2011/10/13/378/#comment-171</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[David Robison]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 13 Oct 2011 16:15:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Some good thoughts, timely for me as I got my first kid due Dec. 1.

Also, I was just in Bellingham a few months ago for my brother&#039;s wedding! He lives in Lynden, and is a total nerd, loves sci-fi and fantasy, and games (board, pen and paper RPG), I guess I rubbed off on him. He went to Masters too. 

OK so I started checking out your blog and stuff, and the overlap in our areas of interest is scarily extensive. I&#039;m working as a network administrator for the Jesus Film Project, raising support to become a missionary to do church planting in Japan, and recently have been world building for a fantasy realm to use in a pen and paper RPG, Sci-Fi and Fantasy is basically the only fiction genre I read, and I&#039;m starting to get sucked into synth-pop.

Also, my brother Jon, who went to Masters same time as us, has been my world-building teammate, and he&#039;s starting to get into fiction writing, and tossing around the idea of using the fantasy world we&#039;re building as the basis for a novell(a), so if you&#039;re still looking for collaborators he might be interested.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some good thoughts, timely for me as I got my first kid due Dec. 1.</p>
<p>Also, I was just in Bellingham a few months ago for my brother&#8217;s wedding! He lives in Lynden, and is a total nerd, loves sci-fi and fantasy, and games (board, pen and paper RPG), I guess I rubbed off on him. He went to Masters too. </p>
<p>OK so I started checking out your blog and stuff, and the overlap in our areas of interest is scarily extensive. I&#8217;m working as a network administrator for the Jesus Film Project, raising support to become a missionary to do church planting in Japan, and recently have been world building for a fantasy realm to use in a pen and paper RPG, Sci-Fi and Fantasy is basically the only fiction genre I read, and I&#8217;m starting to get sucked into synth-pop.</p>
<p>Also, my brother Jon, who went to Masters same time as us, has been my world-building teammate, and he&#8217;s starting to get into fiction writing, and tossing around the idea of using the fantasy world we&#8217;re building as the basis for a novell(a), so if you&#8217;re still looking for collaborators he might be interested.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Three Weeks of Fiction Writing by Fiction Fridays, Take 2 &#124; Unashamed Studios</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Fiction Fridays, Take 2 &#124; Unashamed Studios]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Sep 2011 00:06:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] work hours to less-than-full-time and devoted Fridays to writing my first novel. Three weeks later, I reported: In a way, it seems like things have been going painfully slow, yet there have been some very [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] work hours to less-than-full-time and devoted Fridays to writing my first novel. Three weeks later, I reported: In a way, it seems like things have been going painfully slow, yet there have been some very [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Fiction Fridays by Fiction Fridays, Take 2 &#124; Unashamed Studios</title>
		<link>http://blog.unashamedstudios.com/2009/09/01/fiction-fridays/#comment-165</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Fiction Fridays, Take 2 &#124; Unashamed Studios]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 24 Sep 2011 00:06:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] I stepped down as Director of Teens For Christ, reduced my work hours to less-than-full-time and devoted Fridays to writing my first novel. Three weeks later, I reported: In a way, it seems like things have been [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I stepped down as Director of Teens For Christ, reduced my work hours to less-than-full-time and devoted Fridays to writing my first novel. Three weeks later, I reported: In a way, it seems like things have been [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Skillet&#8217;s Awake by Peter Rust</title>
		<link>http://blog.unashamedstudios.com/2009/08/31/skillets-awake/#comment-164</link>
		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Peter Rust]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jul 2011 23:49:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Monica!

I just bought it from the skillet store -- apparently there&#039;s no more of this particular shirt, though -- but there are a few others: http://www.kotisdesign.com/estore/default.asp?estore=skillet&amp;view=default]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Monica!</p>
<p>I just bought it from the skillet store &#8212; apparently there&#8217;s no more of this particular shirt, though &#8212; but there are a few others: <a href="http://www.kotisdesign.com/estore/default.asp?estore=skillet&#038;view=default" rel="nofollow">http://www.kotisdesign.com/estore/default.asp?estore=skillet&#038;view=default</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Skillet&#8217;s Awake by monica</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[monica]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jul 2011 23:20:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Love the Skillet T- shirt. You sell them? I want to get one for my son who loves Skillet and he is only 5yrs old.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Love the Skillet T- shirt. You sell them? I want to get one for my son who loves Skillet and he is only 5yrs old.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Three Weeks of Fiction Writing by Earthquake Remix &#171; Unashamed Studios Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Earthquake Remix &#171; Unashamed Studios Blog]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Nov 2009 15:54:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] I&#8217;ve been dreaming about creating a soundtrack for the book I&#8217;m writing, so when I heard she was doing a remix competition with a deadline in 1 month, I figured it was the [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I&#8217;ve been dreaming about creating a soundtrack for the book I&#8217;m writing, so when I heard she was doing a remix competition with a deadline in 1 month, I figured it was the [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on Three Weeks of Fiction Writing by Peter Rust</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[Peter Rust]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Nov 2009 15:22:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Hayley, thanks for your interest!

Writing is going well - though I have to admit I&#039;m taking a one-month break (1.5 weeks left) to learn Sonar (I downloaded the incredibly frustrating and hard-to-use 30-day free trial) and use it to create a remix for a remix competition.

I&#039;m finding that the writing is getting easier, the deeper I get. The story is roughly divided into three acts and I&#039;ve got the scenes of the first act fairly set and have a rough idea of the scenes in the second act. Its a little weird, painstakingly nailing out an outline with 40-60 scenes when I know most of them will change once I put together a Story Team and we find lots of ways to make the story better, but it&#039;s important to have a starting point.

Formally, Twilight doesn&#039;t have a lot to do with my story (it&#039;s in the teen romance and vampire genres and my story is really in neither of those). But informally, there are a lot of similarities. Both stories have a lot of action, yet are fully &quot;character-oriented&quot;. Both have a bit of a dark grunge/gothic mood to them, but it&#039;s not overwhelming in either. Also, the Twilight script is, well, a movie script and thus reads fairly quickly -- something my story will do also.

Mainly I was just impressed with how the script brought out the characters so vividly in so few words. This comes naturally when you&#039;re condensing a couple-hundred-page novel, but to do it without writing the couple-hundred-page novel first is more challenging. One technique to do just that (which they used to do in the film industry) is what they call &quot;full treatments&quot; (if you&#039;d like, I could post more about them from Rob McKee&#039;s book &quot;Story&quot;).

Things are going real well with us. I&#039;ve just finished translating Acts 1:1-14 (this time with the help/editing of our pastor, who&#039;s a Greek pro) and am co-teaching on it at our church&#039;s youth group tomorrow night. Jimmy&#039;s almost 4 and Jessica just helped out a little at his preschool (at Christ Fellowship, Everson).]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Hayley, thanks for your interest!</p>
<p>Writing is going well &#8211; though I have to admit I&#8217;m taking a one-month break (1.5 weeks left) to learn Sonar (I downloaded the incredibly frustrating and hard-to-use 30-day free trial) and use it to create a remix for a remix competition.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m finding that the writing is getting easier, the deeper I get. The story is roughly divided into three acts and I&#8217;ve got the scenes of the first act fairly set and have a rough idea of the scenes in the second act. Its a little weird, painstakingly nailing out an outline with 40-60 scenes when I know most of them will change once I put together a Story Team and we find lots of ways to make the story better, but it&#8217;s important to have a starting point.</p>
<p>Formally, Twilight doesn&#8217;t have a lot to do with my story (it&#8217;s in the teen romance and vampire genres and my story is really in neither of those). But informally, there are a lot of similarities. Both stories have a lot of action, yet are fully &#8220;character-oriented&#8221;. Both have a bit of a dark grunge/gothic mood to them, but it&#8217;s not overwhelming in either. Also, the Twilight script is, well, a movie script and thus reads fairly quickly &#8212; something my story will do also.</p>
<p>Mainly I was just impressed with how the script brought out the characters so vividly in so few words. This comes naturally when you&#8217;re condensing a couple-hundred-page novel, but to do it without writing the couple-hundred-page novel first is more challenging. One technique to do just that (which they used to do in the film industry) is what they call &#8220;full treatments&#8221; (if you&#8217;d like, I could post more about them from Rob McKee&#8217;s book &#8220;Story&#8221;).</p>
<p>Things are going real well with us. I&#8217;ve just finished translating Acts 1:1-14 (this time with the help/editing of our pastor, who&#8217;s a Greek pro) and am co-teaching on it at our church&#8217;s youth group tomorrow night. Jimmy&#8217;s almost 4 and Jessica just helped out a little at his preschool (at Christ Fellowship, Everson).</p>
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		<title>Comment on Three Weeks of Fiction Writing by HayleyAnn</title>
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		<dc:creator><![CDATA[HayleyAnn]]></dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Nov 2009 23:58:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hey Peter, 
It&#039;s really great that you have time for writing now.  How is that going? How much do you have written? and what does Twilight have to do with your story? Am I that far out of the loop? =) Hope all is well with you and your family. 
(Phil.1:2)]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Peter,<br />
It&#8217;s really great that you have time for writing now.  How is that going? How much do you have written? and what does Twilight have to do with your story? Am I that far out of the loop? =) Hope all is well with you and your family.<br />
(Phil.1:2)</p>
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